Alice and the wonderland

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WALT: use our senses to write a description 

here is the photo that we had to write about 

  and here is my writing

Alice and the wonderland 

The floor gave way as I was walking down the road and suddenly I fell deep deep down a hole.It wasn’t just a hole, it had old dusty books around it that looked like the books were ancient.tiny pieces of wood pierced my fingers my screams were echoing as I was falling. Then a beam of light shined bright in my eyes. I was yelling, Help me! As loud as I could but no one could hear me I was frightened. I looked around and as I was looking around I could hear whooshing wind and I could smell the damp air and wind hitting me as I reached the bottom of the hole. I stood up and walked around then I saw a ginormous spider. I screamed but then rocks came caving down on me I knew that was very bad, so I ran and ran as fast as I could.once I was away from the rocks I cloud smell something musty and dusty and I could feel the spider coming to me but then stale air came and entered my mouth.