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Thursday, September 16, 2021

poetry

hey guys

we have been doing same poetry. we had to do 10 poems on are slide show so hope you like it.

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4 comments:

  1. AdeleSeptember 16, 2021 at 2:12 PM

    Hi Laila,
    Great work on your poetry anthology, I loved them! Just be careful when counting the syllables in your lockdown haiku, could you please recheck this one?, and made a change please.
    Thanks for sharing :) Great to see you back at work

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2021 at 12:06 PM

    Hi laila

    I loved all your poems but for your lockdown haiku poem could you recount the syllables but other than that it was excellent

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